Startup PR Tip: To Get Press, Don't Pitch Your Product

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Startup PR Tip: To Get Press, Don't Pitch Your Product


Entrepreneurs that are looking to get attention from bloggers and journalists will often pitch their businesses themselves or though a PR agency.

It's sad that most of those pitches fall flat and are likely to be completely ignored. A waste of time and money for everyone.product pitch small

For example, here’s a pitch from a PR professional. I’ve changed it slightly to avoid embarrassing anyone:

“I’m working with a wonderful new business… The owners grew up together and decided to go into business… it’s a story I’m sure your readers will care a lot about!”

Uh, no. It's unlikely that people are going to care about this story.

Don’t get me wrong. I’m sure the entrepreneurs are great people, but many entrepreneurs can tell a tale of struggle and euphoria and heartbreak and someday, against all odds, turning their dreams into reality and making their business a success. While occasionally readers might be inspired or motivated, for the most part we’re just not that interested in other people’s stories. Unless those stories are particularly remarkable we're more apt to just keep living our own dreams and writing our own stories. So, the things we're interested in is not other people's stories, but information that helps us write our own.

So what should you do if you’re trying to spread the word about new products and services, landing new customers, bringing investors onboard… all the stuff you hire PR agencies to do for you or, more likely, try to do on your own?

If you’re looking for press, forget the formulaic, cookbook approach to crafting a winning media pitch. That approach may result in coverage in a few outlets… but not the ones you really want.

Quick rule of thumb: Any media outlet that will do a story based on a crappy pitch is a media outlet that will get you crappy exposure.

Let’s pretend you’re thinking about pitching me an article idea for (which has a modestly sized, but awesome audience).  You can apply the following to any media outlet or blog, though.

Here’s what to do and not to do:

Don’t tell me your story is unique.

No offense, but it really isn’t. There are thousands of Ramen noodle stories. There are thousands of 3 am “Eureka!” stories. There are thousands of maxed-out credit cards, relatives won’t return your calls, last-minute financing savior stories.

Your story is deservedly fascinating to you because you lived it (just as my story is fascinating to me), but to the average reader your story sounds a lot like every other entrepreneur’s story. Claiming your story is unique creates an expectation that, if not met, negatively impacts the rest of your pitch.

And if your story truly is unique, I’ll know. You won’t have to tell me.

Don’t tell me how much a little publicity will help you.

Never waste time by explaining how this could be a win-win relationship or, worse, by claiming you want to share your wisdom because you simply want to help others.

I know you want publicity, and I know why. I get it. I've been there. We’re cool.

Know what I’ve done recently.

It’s easy to think, “Hey, he recently wrote about choosing a co-founder, so I should pitch a story about how I help people find co-founders”

Um, probably not. If just wrote about co-founders. I’m probably good for a little bit on that topic. Never assume one article indicates an abiding fascination with a particular topic.

But do feel free to pitch if you aren’t a member of the choir I just preached to. Different points of view catch my attention; same thing, different day does not.

Know my interests.

You certainly don’t need to know I enjoy late-night walks on the beach. (Hey, who doesn’t?) But skim a few posts and you’ll know I have a soft spot for company culture, startup funding and startup marketing

So if you really want to get my attention, don’t use the tried-but-in-no-way-true “mention you really enjoyed something recent the writer wrote” approach.

Instead put your effort into finding an angle that may appeal to my interests. If you can’t be bothered to do that you’ll never get the publicity you want.

Forget a profile piece.

Straight profile pieces that tell the story of a business are boring. (At least I think so, which is why I don't post those)

The best articles let readers learn from your experience, your mistakes, and your knowledge. Always focus on benefiting readers: When you do, your company gets to bask in the reflected PR glow.

So,readers don’t want to know what you do; they want to know what you know. If you started a company, share five things you learned about landing financing. If you developed a product, share four mistakes you made early on. If you entered a new market, share three strategies you used to steal market share from competitors.

And while you may think the “5 steps to” or “4 ways to” approach is overdone, keep in mind readers love them… and even if I decide not to frame the story that way, developing mental bullet points ahead of time is a great way to organize your information (which helps me) and ensure you have great talking points (which definitely helps you.)

Realize that the more you feel you need to say… the less you really have to say.

Some people think bloggers are lazy and look for stories that write themselves. I can’t argue with the lazy part, but I really don’t want to read a 1,000-word pitch with a comprehensive overview of the topic and a list of semi-relevant statistics. The best products can be described in a few sentences, and so can the best pitches:

So now let’s get specific. Pretend you’re crafting your pitch:

Remember: forget what you want.

Many people think, “Wow, it would be awesome if ran a story about our new product—think of the exposure! So many VCs would read it! We're looking for funding!"

Maybe so, but unless you focus on how readers can benefit from the story (learning about your new product isn’t a benefit to readers), that’s not going to happen.

Then, think about what I want.

I want to inform and occasionally – hopefully – entertain readers; the more you can help me accomplish that goal, the more interested I am in what you have to say.

Then craft your pitch with publicity as a secondary goal.

In the example above, the PR pro didn’t offer readers anything. His only focus was on getting publicity to benefit his clients.

Flip it around and focus solely on how you can benefit readers. When you do, your company will benefit by extension.

For example, if you want to spread the word about:

· New products or services: Share four lessons learned during the product development process; describe three ways you listened to customers and determined how to better meet their needs; explain the steps involved in manufacturing products overseas, especially including what you did wrong.

· Landing a major customer: Describe how you changed your sales process to allow you to compete with heavy hitters in your industry; share three stories about major sales that got away and what you learned from failing to reel them in; detail the steps you took to quickly ramp up capacity while ensuring current customers needs were still met.

· Bringing in key investors: Explain how you helped investors embrace your vision for the company; describe four key provisions that create the foundation for a solid partnership agreement; share the stories of three pitches to VCs that went horribly wrong and how those experiences helped you shape a winning pitch.

Sound like a lot of work? It is, but it’s worth it. When you offer to help people solve problems and learn from your mistakes, bloggers and writers will be a lot more interested.

More importantly, readers will be more interested in the news you want to share because first you helped them—and that gives them a great reason to be interested in your business.

Posted by Dharmesh Shah on Thu, May 16, 2013


Hi, If you're looking for new places to lodge your story, I would love to hear some war stories about marketing a business (small or online). I have two web properties, both with useful content for business marketers. They are both optimised for search.

posted on Monday, May 20, 2013 at 8:08 PM by Jennifer L

Hi, if our company has a good Press release to distribute, do you know where we can get full press release website to post our article?

posted on Tuesday, May 21, 2013 at 6:49 PM by Cythia Lim

Hi, what about negative stories like failure - How not to get funded? 
Or from the post - How to lose all your family? 

posted on Tuesday, May 21, 2013 at 7:41 PM by Allan

Good and handy advice - that's encouraging. Thanks for sharing!

posted on Saturday, May 25, 2013 at 3:46 AM by Victor

Nice to know how the readers think. Very useful points to prepare a draft pitch. Thanks for sharing.

posted on Saturday, May 25, 2013 at 5:43 AM by Vipul Bhavsar

Very helpful article! I totally agree that added value for customers is what makes the content really worthy and catchy! Many bloggers should stick to that principle so they gain the engagement of their audience! 
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posted on Tuesday, May 28, 2013 at 9:51 AM by Velly Angelova

Awesome article- always keeping the WIIFM in mind for your audience is crucial.

posted on Monday, June 03, 2013 at 4:32 PM by Jim McClinsey

I was impressed on your writing skills. You are a good writer. The article is great. 

posted on Tuesday, June 04, 2013 at 12:04 AM by Ice Cream Parlour in Mangalore

Great read very helpful as I am working towards promoting my school building project in Rwanda

posted on Thursday, June 06, 2013 at 6:08 AM by Allan Walker

Man, I get pitched all the time for some of the most boring stuff and I always just delete the email. Half the time it's stuff not even relevant to my site. I guess PR people hope to just flood their info out there and hopefully someone will bite on it?

posted on Thursday, June 06, 2013 at 9:11 AM by Eric Scism

Great post, we referenced this in our post too :) Thanks for the great content!

posted on Tuesday, June 11, 2013 at 10:56 AM by Vijay

thanks for the tips!

posted on Friday, June 14, 2013 at 12:36 PM by katie

Wonderful Post. Will surely implement a lot of the pointers for a Good PR.

posted on Thursday, June 27, 2013 at 7:05 AM by Amit Desai

The end of the press release should contain the boiler plate, which includes the information about the company or person in the above information. It should also provide the contact information and the name of whom the media should contact, address, phone, fax, e-mail and website. To get Get Press Coverage you can submit your press release directly to each media outlet or you can utilize news wires, which the media taps into to find newsworthy topics.

posted on Tuesday, July 09, 2013 at 10:40 PM by Submit Your Startup

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